Class Six

This lesson was somewhat uncomfortable as we were given back our essays! As uncomfortable as getting back marked essays is, it wasn't as bad I perhaps thought it might be! This lesson was about looking at our mistakes and learning from them. I know myself that sometimes I can shy away from constructive criticism if I think the mark is acceptable, but this had made me understand how important feedback is in an essay! I found that although I had grasped what the main three scenarios in this text were, which I was very proud of. However, there were elements of this essay that I could vastly improve! Luckily there was a re-draft, which would be our second assignment, and I was glad that I might be able to redeem myself!