Saturday 28 April 2012

By the end of term I was finishing all of my essays whilst battling the most horrible of colds! Nonetheless I trooped onwards and went to Writing Skills! However, I had completely forgotten about the test and I was so frustrated that I hadn't revised for it at all. I was in shock to begin with, but as I went through it, it all started to come back to me, luckily! The most difficult part of the test for me was the last part, correcting somebody else's work, but I think I managed to pick up on a fair few of the mistakes! I hope I did well in that test as I have thoroughly enjoyed writing skills and am very thankful, as it has helped my essay writing technique immensely! I think you'll also be glad to know that I can no longer read an article and not analyse, just so I really know what the journalist is talking about!


Class Nine

In this class we learnt how to reference. This was extremely helpful for me for a couple of reasons. Firstly, because I knew how the Harvard system worked but did not know about the Chicago system at all! Secondly, I had just recently acquired a new laptop and only have Microsoft word starter so I wasn't able to footnote and therefore needed another way of referencing so that I didn't plagerise! Obviously I was very happy after having learnt that, although I do think it's strange that the university can't make up its mind about which one it should use as it makes things very confusing in different modules!

Class Eight

This time in class we were not only learnt how to analyse one persons opinion but this time we learnt how to compare and contrast peoples opinions. We were given an article and this time told to compare people's opinions on a subject and group them together. I thought initially that this was a very easy task! However, this was just practise for our next essay where we would have to write an essay about comparing and contrasting ideas about the sloppy use of English. For me I felt that although I knew I had to incorporate my own opinion I believed that the given material should be the main subject of my essay! Oh how I was wrong! Luckily, once again we were given the opportunity of a re-draft and I was very thankful for this!


Class Seven

This next class moved swiftly on to a different type of text. Our different subject was 'The Microsoft Debate'. Here we saw one man giving his opinion on Microsoft and the ruling of Judge Thomas Jackson. However, you can see in the text that he gives a lot of people's opinions and arguments in order to back up his own claims. For the most part it is hard to decipher which side he is on as much of the article seems to be impartial! However, using our new found analytical skills we see that the writer says that two people "make the valid point" thus, indicating to us that he is on their side; this side is the one that believes that Microsoft is a good, noteworthy company, and for the most part i agree with him!



Class Six

This lesson was somewhat uncomfortable as we were given back our essays! As uncomfortable as getting back marked essays is, it wasn't as bad I perhaps thought it might be! This lesson was about looking at our mistakes and learning from them. I know myself that sometimes I can shy away from constructive criticism if I think the mark is acceptable, but this had made me understand how important feedback is in an essay! I found that although I had grasped what the main three scenarios in this text were, which I was very proud of. However, there were elements of this essay that I could vastly improve! Luckily there was a re-draft, which would be our second assignment, and I was glad that I might be able to redeem myself!

Class Five

Class Five was primarily about punctuation. Although I would like to think that I have quite a decent grasp on punctuation there are indeed certain things that to this day I misuse but, this will not happen any more! My biggest punctuation error is the misuse of colons and semi-colons, and i'm quite sure that many people struggle with this problem. After this lesson I however, will never fail to mix them up again as now i know that a colon : is for a list and a semi-colon ; is only used where there is a relationship to the previous text.


This lesson also reminds me of something I found whilst browsing the internet, which also illustrates how important punctuation really is! An English Professor writes on the Board the sentence 
"A woman without her man is nothing."
The students were then asked to punctuate this sentence. 
The male students of the class wrote
"A woman, without her man, is nothing." 
The female students then wrote
"A woman; without her, man is nothing."


Well, it made me chuckle and I think it illustrates how important punctuation is, a change of a comma or a semi-colon can completely alter the meaning of a sentence!

Class Four

This lesson began by first learning how to paraphrase properly. Initially I thought I knew how to do this quite well. However, I did learn to be careful as there are so many ways it can be done wrong! In order for it to be done properly the quote must be edited enough to fit the context of your writing, if need be the grammar and language must be changed and these [ ] are the most important tools! They must be used for any part of the quote that has been edited and is not the same in the original text! 


We then moved on to summarising. We were taught how to read a text, fully understand it and then summarise it in your own words! It is important that only the most relevant arguments to your chosen topic are picked out so that you don't wander off topic. This was hugely helpful for me, as in essays I often find myself doing this! I like to think it is my active imagination!


Then the class moved on to talking about language and which words are appropriate for what you may be trying to say in your essays! I wrote quite a few of these "Hedging Devices" down as sometimes I struggle with expanding my vocabulary in essays and find that I repeat myself. So all in all this was very helpful to me!